the animation is a little off!!!

A bit limited but good work

It needed more to it.

At first it didn't seem to bad, I liked how you made it look like the guy was doing one thing and it turned out to be something completely different, it needed to be longer though as there were only three things in it and then it was all over. The first one was fine and it raised a smile, the same applied to the second one until you went and made the shit joke, shit jokes aren't funny, they never were and they never will be, it kind of ruined the humour that the movie had as well due to how horible that one joke was. I wasn't too keen on the last one as it didn't really make much sense as it didn't fit in with the rest, it looked like he was running and that turned out to be what he was doing. I'm not too sure why he got shot though, there should have been some sort of reason for it other than you just wanting to put some violence in your movie in order to get a higher score. You needed to sort out the sound quality as well, as the music seemed a little rough at times, you also perhaps should have added some sound effects, but it seemed fine without them, it's only real problem was the shortness of the whole thing.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

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No sound, no real action, no story and i'm sorry, but this gets no points.

LOL!!!!

I FUCKING LOVED THIS!!!

Anal Films.. xD

MAKE MORE THESE ARE LIKE FUCKING AWESOME!!!