Umm...

Well, it was weird, but it was kinda funny, I guess...although I would suggest working on it. You should extend the flash a bit, maybe add some to the story...unicorn seemed random, although the unicorn made it a little funny. Also, the voice at the end was bad, you should touch that up too. A decent idea overall, but could use some work.

Good animation, but slow plot and kinda dumb

Drawing is good, animation is good, but it was kinda slow, and the punchline took too long to deliver once it was over. Dunno, I'll look at other stuff you made, but this was kinda lame.