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^^Good Points^^
A mildly entertaining movie. The methods of prevention and how you explained them was the funniest part about this. I liked part three the best, which was funny when the black screen came up.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that good. I didn't like your style of drawing and you hardly had any animation in this at all. I'm sure some people could easily get bored by this, which is why you need to add more animations in the prevention part of this.

It needed more to it.

There just didn't seem to be much to it, it was mainly just voices and text, there wasn't anything visually entertaining going on, the movie was just solely depending on the sound and nothing else, you should have shown something happening, like when they were talking about kids getting electrocuted you should have shown some kids getting electrocuted rather than just having text and a drawing of a collar that you did, if this had had something visual to go with it it could have been an alright movie as the plot wasn't too bad. You needed to sort out the sound with this as it was poor throughout, with the voices you had your mouth too close to the microphone and it just didn't sound good at all and with the music you just had a very short piece on a constant loop and every time it ended you heard it restarting far too clearly.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

lol that was funny

i kept hearing the mic being passed around and being dropped lol and at the end where everything is backwards LOL thast was mad funny man u get a 10 (+the 5 im voting) G.J

Awesome

heh heh, that was funny. but whats with the messed up loop of "the way" at the beginning?

I would have to say...

The narration of the movie where pretty, sorry to say low quality, The style how ever is pretty cool except when you draw the characters please put more thought into them they are missing their necks.