Not much new, some different things and i tryed some explosions ^^
Feedback please?
AAAHHH
Preloader didnt work
Lots of room for improvement
Pros:
your animation was smooth
good choice of music
Cons:
Screen was tiny
presentation was boring
lack of imagination
try coming up with characters, and a storyline. Noone wants to see your first experiment with a flash animation if it has nothing interesting to offer. Sit down and think about something that would make a cool little story or a funny joke, and bring it to life. Keep trying and you will succeed.
I didnt mean the screen to be that tiny but oh well's.
I am thinking about sorys and joke's :p
good try
I can see you put alot of time and effort into this and tryed to make it the best you can. Tip one: add some sfx you can get them from alot of different sites e.g sound snap or flash kit.
Tip two: try to improve your drawing and use symbols.
Tip three: use some basic action scripting it can be very usefull.
Tip four: look at the tutorial collection in newgrounds it is VERY usefull
Thanks for the tip, i am a coder already :p
Granted i am not very good at coding but i am still trying my drawing skills.
Thanks for the tips and the reviews.
Positive, then tips!
