Awsome Plot

I think if EgoRaptor Did This Exact Same Thing, IT WOULD BE AS FUNNY AS HELL!

sound

you need sound. and this movie plays in a loop.

Don't cram the portal.

Test animation yourself, don't submit it to us.

yey, stick figures

It was very good, the kind of humor I like, but tri adding sounds, no bad sounds, just like "smash, pow" and stuff, yah know.
:D

Its alright

You need to use make the text go slower and should maybe use something esle to make this. It was a little humorous. If your a begginner it was alright.