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Sep 27, 2008 | 7:09 PM EDT

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Author Comments

I've really never done this flash thing before. Figured I'd give something pretty simple a shot.
Advanced criticism is encouraged.

AS3 Animated Preloader (c) John Dalziel of



Rated 5 / 5 stars

My day has come...

Finally. I feel like i can save the world. I'll need everyone's help though. Get me as much butter and syrup as you can find! I'll need a big fork too... and maybe some bacon...

onefifth responds:

It would be the breakfast of a true superhero.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Who will save us!

I'll tune into your next exiting episode to find out?

onefifth responds:

We'll see. I don't know if I have the time or the motivation.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


i liked this, just give it more of a plot line and i'll give it a ten. and here's a tip, never say that its your first flash, or that you're a begginer, people wont even watch it, they just blam it.

onefifth responds:

That's an unfortunate representation of the community, but luckily I can only make that mistake once. Thanks for the heads up in any case.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice for your first try!

Wow! The animation in this was good, especially for your first try, and it is good to start with something short by the way. I think that you have some real potential, I'll hope to see more of your stuff soon!

P.S. the punchline made me laugh to myself a little bit (and that is really hard to do)

onefifth responds:

Thanks for the positive feedback. I hadn't really considered make it longer, but I may now.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good preview.

Looks good for you first time, I think you should take this farther and make it a full fledged animation. That would be fantastic to see Space waffles attacking earth!