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I've really never done this flash thing before. Figured I'd give something pretty simple a shot.
Advanced criticism is encouraged.

AS3 Animated Preloader (c) John Dalziel of http://www.computus.org

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My day has come...

Finally. I feel like i can save the world. I'll need everyone's help though. Get me as much butter and syrup as you can find! I'll need a big fork too... and maybe some bacon...

onefifth responds:

It would be the breakfast of a true superhero.

Who will save us!

I'll tune into your next exiting episode to find out?

onefifth responds:

We'll see. I don't know if I have the time or the motivation.

nice

i liked this, just give it more of a plot line and i'll give it a ten. and here's a tip, never say that its your first flash, or that you're a begginer, people wont even watch it, they just blam it.

onefifth responds:

That's an unfortunate representation of the community, but luckily I can only make that mistake once. Thanks for the heads up in any case.

Nice for your first try!

Wow! The animation in this was good, especially for your first try, and it is good to start with something short by the way. I think that you have some real potential, I'll hope to see more of your stuff soon!

P.S. the punchline made me laugh to myself a little bit (and that is really hard to do)

onefifth responds:

Thanks for the positive feedback. I hadn't really considered make it longer, but I may now.

Good preview.

Looks good for you first time, I think you should take this farther and make it a full fledged animation. That would be fantastic to see Space waffles attacking earth!

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Votes
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Score
4.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 27, 2008
7:09 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original