It needed something to happen in it.

What you had was fairly nicely done, the only problem is that you didn't have anything happening in it, the woman came towards the screen and that was it. It would have been a nice intro to a movie but as a movie by itself it was poor due to the lack of anything happening in it. You should have had some sort of story after the movie involving that woman, it could have made a really good movie. I liked how at the start you showed the eyes it instantly created that sense of mystery and it was nicely done apart from the choice of music as it just didn't create the sense of getting into the action, mainly due to the fact that that piece of music is overused. Perhaps you could have had some sort of frame by frame animation in this as well, as it looked kind of poor that all the animation in it was just motion-tweened.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

omg!

aaaah its coming for me! heh heh pretty funny, dunno who its meant to be though?
oh yea an you should stop the movie looping but i dont really care. gee who or what was that thing??

OH MY GOD!!!!!

DUDE!!!!!!
that was wrong!
I have only seen evil like that once, and she was the minute market lady.
may the powers of good help us all!!!!!

Oh....my....GOD!

First up...I gave you a 10 for violence for the damaging psychological scars you inflicted to me. Seriously...was it fucking neccesary to zoom up to all her facial hair & warts?!!!
Goddamn you,man! Godamn you to hell!

Okay....before I curl up in a fetal position muttering to whatever deity to end this mindnumbing terror...I'd like to make a guess on the identity of this Revlon model here....he/she is your stalker who thinks your the next best thing to God & is currently changing the formaldylhide in the jar containing your missing toew which you assume you lost at the NG company mountain trek back in 99, whistling to the tune of 'I Wanna Be With You' (if you kids don't remember,...its that wretchedJessica Simpson song which was 'da rave' 15 minutes ago.....don't ask how I get to here it...It's...too ....painful to rehash)


Okay...I can see I overshot....Fuck that heroin!

No plot!

Is your girlfriend happy you made a movie about her?