Well good voice over.

But i didnt quite understand a joke XD. But i still give you a 5 though.

hmmmm

The drawing quality was decent, but a bit generic, the animation was ummm, "sticky" the movement was jumpy due to hand positions of the character just jumping around, so you might want to add some frames btween the stills really giving a sense of movement., the voice actors, didn't really seem to get into the scene. You might want to add crowd type sound effects, and maybe intro music like they would actualy have on a stand up comic show. The joke was horrible, aand verrry old, this may have been what you are going for, but you didn't put in any audience response, so there's no way to really tell.

Nice animatic

I would certainly like to see the finished animation.
Cool!