pretty good
Bits of it were really good and nicely animated, it just moved really quickly and I wasn't sure what was going on half the time though. I say slow things down a little, give the viewer time to take in what you're presenting to them.
Author Comments
Sorry bout' the large file.
A girl goes on adventures with a magical scarf.
Fixed some problems mentioned.
Please, watch the first half before rating. It really helps to understand what is going on.
First half- http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/457593
Second half on DA in case there are sizing problems here like last time.
http://gopherguy.devianta rt.com/art/Scarfy-ep-1-pa rt-2-98692902
Enjoy.
Bleak-Creep responds:
I always seem to get this comment. I think every shot should be entertaining, therefore, I just keep it on screen til' I'm bored with it. I may try to do a slow paced animation in the future though. I just have to come up with a story to match the pace.
lol
random goodness
Bleak-Creep responds:
Thank you, kindly.
good
nice job fixing the bugs but the whole story went a little fast, other then that nice job
Bleak-Creep responds:
Thanks, I hoped it wold at least be a bit better.
This could have been a Nickolodeon short...
...and thats not a good thing.
Bleak-Creep responds:
Aw, mans. I hates Nickoledeon these days. Will try harder next time.
that was roflcopter-licious
Dunno what that was about at all, but it was well animated and well thought out, and proabably would have made since had I watched the whole thing and the first part.
tl;dr= win
Bleak-Creep responds:
Thanks. And yeah, like nobody watched the first half. Would probably only partly help though, it jumps around a lot.