Here is my final I did for my intro to 2d animation class. Instructor seemed to like it. I know some of the things that need to be fixed still but I figured I put it up and see what you guys think. Also some of the movie got cut off from the workspace in Flash not sure how to fix that.
Decent but needs more
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad the animation itself seemed ok but might be improved with some music and or sound/fx, its a good little animation though, i look forward to your future works
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add sond/fx and or music, you can even try something from the audio portal
~~OVERALL~~
Nice animation but needs work
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fail.
Nuf said.
So why now???
hmmm
Seems ok, I guess, but you shouldn't put up half finished stuff. Good animation needs to be colorized and sound added. I look forward to seeing the finished project. You may also wantt to make it a bit longer,good luck in your future animation.
it supposed to be in black and white and no sound but I can redo it later down the road.