I'm not gonna go easy or be generous with you.
Not like a few of the other people here.
This was HORRIBLE!
The first main thing I noticed was that the characters had two right hands, people seriously need to learn how to arrange hands and tell whether or not a hand is right or left. The animation was also really choppy, USE MORE FRAMES, YOU HAVE 16000 OF THEM, STOP RUSHING SHIT. If you want a movie to be taken seriously, you need to atleast make it so that any person who has a good sense of judgement believe that you took over 2 days on this.
And what the fuck? Was this movie animated on one damn layer? The backgrounds constantly moved and were piled up with shit.
And your artwork is horrible, I mean the artwork that you actually made, and not ripped from that ultimate sheet.