Story about a boy and his watermelon.
Ooooooook?
So, a paper guy wants a watermelon (thief?), suddenly he moonwalks (over a stiched land) and encounter another paper guy (watermelon owner?) which shoot the thief with a 3D gun that has a very, very, VERY strong recoil, yet he miss and hit the watermelon(s?).
Sorry, can't descipher out this story.
Yeah, that's exactly the story.
Damn, after reading all these reviews it has come to me that I'm a good animator but need to make the story line a bit more meaningful. Plus more audio. Maybe I should find someone and we could make collabs n shit.
Watermelons?
err...what? Nice animation, but no storyline leading up to it. Needs more audio.
I'll get right on that.
Meh
It had cool animation effects, but they didn't fit in very well....
K...
I hate to say this...
...but there is about as much story here as there is audio.
Daing!