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Watermelons

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Story about a boy and his watermelon.

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Ooooooook?

So, a paper guy wants a watermelon (thief?), suddenly he moonwalks (over a stiched land) and encounter another paper guy (watermelon owner?) which shoot the thief with a 3D gun that has a very, very, VERY strong recoil, yet he miss and hit the watermelon(s?).

Sorry, can't descipher out this story.

Lorkas responds:

Yeah, that's exactly the story.

Damn, after reading all these reviews it has come to me that I'm a good animator but need to make the story line a bit more meaningful. Plus more audio. Maybe I should find someone and we could make collabs n shit.

Watermelons?

err...what? Nice animation, but no storyline leading up to it. Needs more audio.

Lorkas responds:

I'll get right on that.

Meh

It had cool animation effects, but they didn't fit in very well....

Lorkas responds:

K...

I hate to say this...

...but there is about as much story here as there is audio.

Lorkas responds:

Daing!

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3.41 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 20, 2008
4:57 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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