(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I was surprised by how good the use of gradients used in this movie looked. In most cases using gradients in Flash just looks bad. I guess you've got a knack for it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely could use a bit of sound to spice things ups. The movie was pretty short too, I think you need to add a bit more storyline to your next movie.

not fair...

don't sell yourself short blfocus, you have just begun to experiment in flash.
maybe this was your first. some of the FIRST content on NG was just above mediocre (no offense NG staff). i am working on a simple flash. i don't even know how to synchronize sound with motion yet.