Pretty Good
I like this, short, ok animation, above average voice over, the joke was funny. Good job
Author Comments
I did this for my AP English class. Everybody was impressed. I doubt you guys will be, though.
Edit: The assignment was to create something satirical.
YeoungBraxx responds:
you thought the voice-over was above average? gee, thanks!
You must be in a very retarded class
I must say that I wasted apporximately 30 seconds of my time waiting for the most obvious punchline to appear and to my sheer amzement it did. I really had to struggle to find anything remotely funny about the video and I believe that anyone who does find this even slightly amusing needs a slap to the face. I don't think that it's a contorvertial topic I am just completely astounded how anyone could be impressed by that. The drawings were sloppy, the voice acting was painfully slow and monotonous and I could have predicted THAT punchline even if I was blind deaf and dumb. Satire is the ability to mock ones self and I believe that this video is now a testiment to your bland sense of humour and the great irony is that it is not the subject of the video that is satirical, but it is the video itself that is satirical due to the fact that it will always exist to mock you. However I digress i'm sure when everyone on newgrounds has seen this video they like me and this video will mock your lazy and pathetic form of work. Overall, this deserves a 3 as at least it was some form of an animation with some minute form of plot, however much work must be done if you wish to impress me
YeoungBraxx responds:
and wasting even more time writing a review (for which I thank). I thought the punchline was pretty obvious as well, but people seem to like it, so...
anyway, I think you need to look up the definition of satire. It is not making fun of oneself, it is mocking something in order to point out the weaknesses or evils in it.
ROFL
That was hilarious, I was just searching through the portal and I happened to come across this, simple and too the point.
A+ for punchline.
YeoungBraxx responds:
many thanks. personally, i thought it could have been delivered better.
Simple
Simple and very good message. Hope you got an A.
YeoungBraxx responds:
thanks. I'm not sure yet, but I think I did.
Good message
I got the joke, and though the animation was less then desirable it was very decent.
YeoungBraxx responds:
awesome, thanks.