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READ FIRST PLZ!!!!

heys guys ikm 13 and i got no sound on my pc, sorry!!!!X3, hope u guys dont blam this cuz its my first time!
tell me wat u think, kay? oh and could u guys tell me how to use the preloader ^_^'' dont really no how........

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You know what...

I agree with Skittles135.

You don't know if it is or isn't were all human and you forget we can never know the true potential of someone even with knowing the person personally ..

In my opinion i thought it was excellent for a first attempt.

And like the artist said Kiss his ass your first movie probably sucked as well.

This isn't the case though ^ ~ his was pretty damn good.

The only advise i have to give though is work on your spelling and work on making it easier on the eyes for someone when there going to read something in other words...

Slow it down so we can read it ^_^

Well that's all i have to really say just keep up the good work and i hope you enjoy the world of animation if you decide to take it seriously ^_^

Uberwsonicman responds:

thanks man

hmmm

first no sound

second no backround

third the animation was spectaculary crap!

forth no idea or plot to this

fifth its definetly not your first

and to sum it up it sucked!

Uberwsonicman responds:

fuck you

Not bad!

Pretty damn good for a first flash. My suggestions:
1. Work on grammar/spelling
2. Add more going on--you had some cool parts, but maybe background, multiple fights, better detail (there were some parts where I didn't know what happened.)
3. Preloaders are awesome.

Uberwsonicman responds:

ya i did the spelling mistakes on purpose

you know what...

Unlike some of the others, I'm going to take into consideration that this is your first flash, and say that this is a very good effort. I actually enjoyed watching it. Keep up the good work, sir.

Pretty good

Nit bad for you first submission, I'm still getting the hang of flash too. Keep up the good work and keep practicing.

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