it was OK but could've been better.
You need practice. and definately a better mic! Some of the random concepts were waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay out there and could've been a little less random. like the one about muffins.........
Author Comments
A Compilation of many flash shorts I have done some are better quality than others so I tried to mix them up
I threw in some Zelda, Sonic and Portal jokes none of them are "Hilarious per say" but there an epic level of cheesy!
If you like this and want to see more visit vofgofm33.deviantart.com
Ugh
your mic needs to change, get better people and also better animation, houses,and jokes i didnt laugh at all unless you count the skittles part (PS. Maybe you should work with an illustrator or animator)
not bad sam not bad
you mic needs to bee changed other than that not bad
Too random
The animation was crappy, and it was just TOO random!
vgm responds:
Yes the animation could improve but theres no such thing as to random
got any tips as to what i could improve on?
lol
lol, i liked it. it gave me a few giggles, had cheesy jokes, and i approve. now, where's my bacon?!?!?!
vgm responds:
Thanks its always good when people aprove of my cheesy jokes