Slowwww

Hey.. Not bad for a first flash dude. Only thing? Tooo slowwwww....... I was waaiiiting fooorr soomething too happpen. But still, not bad and well done. Hope to see some more, but pick it up a little y'know?

Hold it

time out, flag on the play, offsides, traveling, false start, foul ball, other penalties in sports, what the hell did i just see?

Eh...

Try speeding up the framerate, unless the silence is a pause for effect, it's just boring and a waste of time.

Well....

Pretty cool, luv to see a DBZ/GW/Naruto refrence lol. Still, i cant help but feel that if this was carefully planned out, this could hav been an ongoing series. Rather than just end in one short episode. But u know it was pretty good. HOpe to see more in the future \m/