it was ok, butTry again
keep putting out work,
only needs better sounds and a punchline
Made with 3D Movie Maker (3dmm)
Editing software was used to convert color to black and white. The short also features Spunky from Rocko's Modern Life.
The short was made in a silly, low-budget style fashion. This animated short is supposed to initiate a new-age vaudeville. Sorta like the silent films of the 20th century until the 1920s.
it was ok, butTry again
keep putting out work,
only needs better sounds and a punchline
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This was pretty pointless, and the filter effect you added didnt really help.
You should add sounds, maybe some subtle music, like pizzicato strings just to add some sort of mood and also add a punchline, like "hologramman" mentioned.
Well, I tried to initiate a new-age vaudeville with this!
Plus, I couldn't find the kind of music played in silent films; so I used some brown noise for the effect!
uhhhh...?
This was ok and im being generous....
put an interesting part in or something.....
add sounds....
add somethinggggg!!!!!
Spunkyyyyy! O.O
I love it! Rocko rocks and the animation is cool too. It's a bit hard to see the cat sometimes but oh well.
ummm...
Was the animation stop motion? and im not so sure that really had a story behind it.