i liked it

needs 2 things the chacters to be better and voices

Hmm...

You have a concept for the story, I can see that, however you used horrible sprites for the characters. Try Google searching for some better sprites, and continue to work on your animation. I would like to see this Flash be continued, but with the quality enhanced. Also, see if you can find Voice Actors, it adds to the value of the Flash.

~CelestOrion

what he said

Yes plz fix it, and make part 2 soon

Try not to spoil too much for the halo noobs

3/5

Pretty good...

But it was short. The animations were good, but they were sprites. It did make me hope there will be a halo 4. You had a good story, but again it was short. Over all it was pretty good.

so ok

would like to see you work on this story because you could have something pretty good going but, I'm not digging the sprite animation so yeah better animation would def be a plus but overall this isn't bad

btw you spelled thought wrong in the scrolling prologue