i actually...

...am fascinated with how you put soo much effort into this short. there`re character sketches, explainations and even some cool sound effects going, but what would have been a few more hours on this piece, with moar animation to keep the story going, would have earned you a ten with me. ur doing gr8 tho, moar than i do, lol, so keep it up dude.

Pretty good

I really liked it. It was well made. Hang in there through the portal.