Alright
It was alright, lacking a lot of things such as sound, graphics could use a touch. As well I am pretty sure if I had Alien hand syndrome that I would make friends with my hand =]
Anyway, could use some more work but you got something.
Author Comments
Okay... I apologize since this is a rough thing... it's my first one, and I did it for a project... I've always been on the site, so since it was a flash card... well, it's here...
Hopefully you enjoy it or at least don't hate it so much that it gets deleted automatically. >.<
There are 3 buttons on the bottom left that play, pause, and jump to the end.
You will have to click the play button to start the movie the first time. Click it once at the end to replay from the beginning.
Intereseting.
I found these flash card to be rather interesting. However, you do not include 10 diseases. It goes 10 - 9 - 8 - ? - 2 - 1. What about 6,5,4 and 3?
ArcHorizon responds:
It's the point of the ?... it's saying that the narrator has the disease...
hum...
Well... for the first one i think that your in a good way in the matter of ideas... i can't give mutch, but it was cool to see
Not bad
It seemed to drag on when it could have gone faster. It also could use some sound. It was actually interesting/funny. if it doesn't make it try again with the suggestions I gave u.
ArcHorizon responds:
ok... I may... I mostly just made it, like I said, for a begginner's animation... I'm not so sure I'll remake it if it dosn't get passed... it's just a kinda short that I made... stupid in all sense of the word...
Not bad
Not bad for a first, that's for sure! Just be sure to add sound! I cannot stress sound and length enough!
Now, although yours had length, it was very slow paced - But for the genre that was unavoidable.
It wasn't exactly 'funny', but the dry humor was slightly amusing.
I would really like you to try to build on this one. Add more animation, and sounds. Possibly a few more illnesses, and narration.
Keep up the work, get better each time - And maybe one day you'll be a front pager. ;-)
6 of 10.
ArcHorizon responds:
ok, thanks... Like I've said to the guys who posted after you I made this as a project, and I had no idea how to use actionscript or anything at the time of making, so it came out to be a stupid thing... the timing wasn't down because I was playing with it and the teacher talked to me about length and the like... thanks for your help.