Hmm..not bad keep working on it

Ok if you want a better story line and great animation go to the flash tutorials and see that you can improve, that was a bit neat on the other hand ok?

Watchable

Any longer and it would have been boring, just for your good choice of a Title, almost sarcastic and cynical you get 2 extra points, 4/10, 2/5.

Major Issues

Good:
-Song > I'm a Pappa Roach fan
-Concept> Who doesn't like a movie about heros?

Bad:
-No preloader > It's nice to see loading progress and play the movie when I'm ready
-Graphics > They got the basic idea across, but were to simple to be interesting
-Animation > Overall poor. Nothing moved smoothly.
-Story> I was able to follow what was going on, but there were huge leaps. Perhaps instead of trying to tell everything from how the fire starts to ending up in the hospital, you could focus more on the rescue.

Overall:
There are many issues with this flash, the biggest being the graphics and animation. If you can smooth those out, it will be a huge improvement. I'm also not sure what sort of feedback you are looking for sine you aknowledge the major problems with the flash in its description.

0/5

ehhhhh

Sticks were pourly drawn. Animation wasnt very good. The story didnt make much sense. The guy is a hero, smokes, causes a fire, a neighbor comes in and bring him to the hospital? I dont really get it. Sorry for being Harsh, but it really wasnt good

well...

I get the feeling that there was very little effort put into making this flash. I think it would be so much cooler if you spent more time on this.