I think it was good, the animation wasn't too good. But don't let that discourage you. A great man once said;
" You can follow this equation
good drawing+good concept = awesome animation
but I follow another equation
crap drawing+great concept+comedy = just as awesome animation"
and his name was BoonChild
- B. Scanlan
Interisting concept, you should work on improving the animation. The Sound Quality could be better. Pretty Simple with some humor. Iiked it.
I really enjoyed this flash. And the jokes where pretty good to. The only thing you need to improve on is there mouth's charecter detail and movement. 3/5 7/10. =)
the idea is good, the jokes were pretty good but the sound made the whole thing horrible!!
PLEASE GET A BETTER MIC!!
I couldn't understand half of it
besides that, you've got a good flash on your hands
Super-Biased Man Away!!
Good concept but pretty bad animation with the rayman characters and the faulty backrounds. Pretty decent humour and flowing edit, but the quality of the sound could be better.
Good start none-the-less. Pay more attention to the animation next time because I like the idea.