I actually like that it's so short. I think that you got something going here, I found my self playing it over again so I could read the text. For something as short as this dos'nt really need music, however I do think you could utilize some other sound effects like "popping" or "chiming" when the product pops up. I also think the script could have used some cleaning up, some word choices in the dialogue would have been better than others. It's great, there's nothing wrong with it other than polishing up little things. I look forward to your next post and thanks for sharing.
yikes, you should go into brand labeling... i would buy it, just so i felt better about my high dextrose laced corn syrup condiment; i enhance my tasty pig flesh with.... it; might even trick me into thinking healthy.
I'll admit it gave me a good chuckle; brighten my day if you will. Plus the animation was smooth, and some good character designs. Congrats!
a tad stupid
eh we can always try again, pretty stupid though
gross doesn't mean always funny, but if your going for that don't be shy and go all out! I get the sarcastic vibe ur trying to portray but u need some space filler, like cheesy commercial music in the background.