not too bad
great scene, but i must agree with Corky52
keep with ur good job
Author Comments
Another one of my old old old animations that I made a year ago. Looking back, it's a complete rip-off of Madness Combat.
Not bad.
Pretty good I have to admit. Do you plan on making a series of this?
Animation/Graphics - Well, almost everything was completely fine, except for people themselves. I can't say I really enjoyed the style of drawing that you had here, but if you are going to stick with it then you really need to improve on the smoothness. The men were very rough at best and had some rough edges.
Story - Not bad, not bad at all. A movie that could turn into a series if done correctly. The idea may not be original, but it is something that I enjoy watching. I have to say that there wasn't too much of a story though and it did end kind of sudden. The lack of story is ok, but in future submissions you should do something like having his boss call him up or and telling him who to kill, etc.. That will be stuff that you can come up with if you continue this as a series though.
Audio - I think it really lacked here. The sound effects were fine, but there should have been some background music, and in future submissions you should think about some voice acting. Actually if you want some voice acting I can do some for you. Just drop me a PM with the lines that you want me to say and I will be happy to do it for you.
Overall - A series, if worked on, could be a great series and fun to watch. Keep up the good work.
C52
OGWelsh responds:
thanks for the comment!
uhm well this was one of the first animations i did and at the time i was gonna make this into a series. what i was basically doing with this was trying out frame-by-frame animation which i have since developed quite a skill for (check my rotoscope films if you're interested). so no i dont plan to make this into a series.