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^^Good Points^^
Not bad drawings. You had tasteful use of gradients and the shaping was good with good drawings. I liked the speakonia, and once I understood the storyline, this was a pretty good movie.
^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was way too confusing the way you made it. I originally thought the black guy was killing the clocks, but for some reason you made it so that the stick figure with a clock face was the enemy of the clocks? That made no sense at all. It only started making sense once the last clock came out, and even now I'm not sure about this.