bad

Its interesting for sure

Well sofar what you do have here is notbad there is a nice flow of the characters movment, the end with how you plan to do it kinda kills it so would have been nice if this was a finished product but I did enjoy it for what it was keep at it and make more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
as suggested above.

~X~

Not even nearly done.

Cutting-edge political satire!
As relevant today as it was 15 years ago!

well

that was bad.