Not too impressive. Very choppy and seemed more like a powerpoint than an animation.
Quite well done. The voices were very bad and some dialogue didn't have sound added, no lipsync was apparent as well. The MGS sound was well added but more sound effects were needed.
Very bad art...I'm sure you can do better. Don't get me wrong, some good art was used but it needs a lot of improvement. In a few scenes no backgrounds were used, if you added some the whole flash would feel more professional.
A few good jokes, nothing too original though.
Not much needed, so not much added.
I'm glad you added a preloader, but I only give good marks for this if you created your preloader yourself.
I didn't like the style of this flash. Not much else to say.
No vCam used.
I've seen a lot better, I've seen a lot worse.