like they said
very good for your first try :P it was funny ... loved the intro music :D
i cant even do flash :P
Author Comments
This is my first flash cartoon.
So that would explain the dodgy animation.
So anyway,
A guy finds an apple and wants to eat it.
But will it be THAT easy.
Those of you who were first watching this may have experianced some audio delay. But I have been editing that so you will have to wait until that has been improved.
for first type of that animation good
I enjoyed it alot
Quite funny, nice attempt for a first
Now of course, your first flash isn't going to be perfect, but it was a good attempt. I thought it was just going to be one of those bland "grab for the apple and the apple turns into porn or something," but it wasn't and it was humorous when the apple fired back. The animation could have used more color (like in the background) and you could have taken the time to "try" to fix the dodgy animation. Also the whole ladder thing bummed me out, the ladder was straight, yet he went up it from the side, he should have been on it in the front, like a ladder should be... But besides those it was great, keep going and put more effort in the drawing, I'm sure you can do it.
Good for your first.
It was pretty good, aside from fixing a few graphical glitches, you could maybe animate the guy's legs as he walked. But it was really good for your first flash. Keep up the good work.
Nice
It´s funny but the animations is poor. . .
Shnibs responds:
I know. Not quite got the hang of it all. But thanks anyway.