yeah
not so hot
get some tunes or some sound
spend more time drawing shit thats not stick dudes
give us something man
Author Comments
hi there,
im just starting to get some requests so keep sending more.. who knows maybe ill like it or maybe ill just shit myself laughing
thanks,
Andrew .V.
Hmmmm
***What I liked***
Well it was okay for a first try. Your getting somwhere with this. Keep on practicing man! I think you can do it!
***Improvements***
Make it longer, Don't overdo it with stick figures. And practice!
***Overall***
A good try for a first flash.
GraphicGuy22 responds:
thanks i do need improvment
lol
you need to work on stick i sugest zooming in 800 zoom
Not bad
The stick figures moved very well, and I liked that blood effect. It needs to be longer and some music needs to added that matches the mood of the moment in the flash. It was a decent first try and I hope to see you make more in the future.
GraphicGuy22 responds:
thank you so much!
A good concept that didn't live up...
This isn't too much better than a quick animated GIF...You need to take your time with this, make motion more fluid and looking less like random scribbles. Detail is your friend. You had a decent concept--a good old-fashioned stick-figure fight--but the lack of sound and the poor animation quality caused it to fall flat.
Just remember this for next time. Don't give up quite yet.
GraphicGuy22 responds:
yeah i dont think ill be giving up yet. i mean come on, its my first vid.
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