Nice art and music

Nice job on the animation and sounds, really atmospheric and creepy. I want to know more though as it was a bit short, will there be a sequel ?

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Was ok

You need to explain the plot a lot better. The animation was fine. You should also work on using more sound or voice as well. Otherwise, you did a good job.

Um... what?

I don't really understand the plot, partially it might have to do with the text cutting away suddenly once or twice but also I think it wasn't fully explained.
The art was pretty good, but you didn't really do any animation except a couple of tweens and mouth movement.
About mouth movement, don't just use a couple of set images and usually if you're going to do it you'll include audio dialogue as opposed to text.