one thing

that was da best but if you added some voices in it (NOT MICROSOFT SAM!) It would be the best da best!

Ls's Review

Wow, i thought it would be shit but i was wrong yet it needs improvement,

First of the storyline is nice,
Second it needs more Audio e.g Sound to fit with the dialog and music at the end or something,
The Animation was not bad at all,
I think this could have a much higher score with a little improvement,

Good luck!

YAR!!

I Be a Pirate!

Kind of boring.

I'll admit the dialogue was funny at some points but everything else was too simple. It was very boring without voices so maybe try getting some voice actors in there, and put a lot more effort into the flash.
All in all it didn't do a thing for me...

audio!

Could have used more audio :( like the only sound was the door bell