!!!!NO PRELOADER!!!
very noob of me but yea just let it load and hopefully you dont have bad internet connection
sorry ^-^;;
My very first submission on to newgrounds and one of many soon to come.
Very beginner stuff but ill get better soon, and hopefully get a graphing tablet soon.
This is for my friends birthday so it was made less than a hour. So hope everyone enjoys it. ^-^
Not bad
The art work itself isn't bad, in fact it's very good. The animation was pretty smooth, but the flash itself seemed to look gritty, and seemed like it needed to be cleaned up. Although, I don't know if you were going for that look.
And this is my personal preference, but I think there should have been some sound, either just little sound effects or have the animation set to music, but overall this isn't bad for a first submission, you could have always done ALOT worse.
lol actually i screwed up on the whole finalizing process. I turned it to avi and put it on windows movie maker, and then turned to playback on computer so it killed the quality on it. and yea next animations will have color and sound and what not. thanks for the review.
just feels like
your trying to pull off some type of "there she is" movie which is fine and all but it needed sound, preloader, and maybe more time and effort but dont you give up, keep on using flash :)
lol yea i guess, i was. i watched all to step 4 and it was probably stuck in head. thanks for the review, ill take your advice =]
sorry no
it may have been alot higher.
thanks for review =]