TRASH

AWESOME!

When is the next part?

NOT GOOD

i dont like it. See if your going to make an animation and put words on it you might aswelll write a book

It was ok...

Kind of good, but not really something I would consider doing unless you put some faster text in or at least not so much. More fighting and probably with what you got, would turn out to be something good. Not to mention sound is good as well.

Not that great

I really am a bit disappointed. A lot of the DBZ things are really funny. This was just a strange story. Anyway, it would also be much better if it had some flash animation. This _is_ the flash portal, after all.