Great stuff
Well, what an interesting take on MGS, with SRM... MGSRM, which seems to work.
The fact that you deviated from the voice of SRM this time works really well and gives a whole new dynamic to your work, especially when you use things like the "bocks" gag, for the usual touch of SRM.
Yes, maybe this was a little short and there could have been more gags in there revolving around stealth and Snake finding something to eat - perhaps a Nandos or Taco Bell, for example would have bulked it out - I liked the communications, though they seemed a little colourful, compared to what I'm used to seeing on that front.
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