um the voices and audio were a bit off but make it a bit longer next time
I have found out what the problem is and it is due to Internet explorer. I am running firefox and thats why I havnt noticed it. f u have any ideas on how to solve this problem please let me know.
The intro was great, the art was cool, the song couldn't have been better, but the joke, ehhh. Definitely has potential as far as I am concerned because I would like to see how you continue the story.
I really loved the beginning and I was wondering why it only had just over 3/5. Then the music stopped and I understood. Dude you need to come with something better as an ending. And don't stop a video in the middle of a story, it ruins everything.
You can also consider making musicvideos, cause the intro was pretty much perfect.
The reason for the ending is so it can continue, but yeah it could be better. The middle bit is due to it originally being in two parts, but if I really had to I could join them with out having the to be continued bit.
Thanks for the review!
I think I'm biased because I like the song. Looks like it has potential though! Good stuff ^.^
looked good but...
it looked good but why did you stop the music?