lol?

puffstool should release spores and take control of cuddles and make cuddles kill herself XD

Epic Dissatisfaction

Simplicity in story, shrill SFX, the B&W style done poorly, etc...
Also, 'Fin' is just a fad in film-making. Many will tell you it's French, but 'finir' is french for finish. Just say the end or something like normal people...

Rubbish

No story bad drawing skills looks nothing like a puffstool

could have been better

i liked ur other flash more i think.
wasnt that bad tho!
cheers for using my music

Don't take notice of the 'more colour' review.

There is nothing wrong with not using colour, it's just a style, and plenty of good artists use similar styles. As for sound - try taking advantage of some audio editing software to make the cuts not so blunt. Keep it up.