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Just something I made, I known its not great but I need to start some where with doing the actual movie side of flash and not just symbols and loops.
P.S I know its really bad but please review and give tips.

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good!

Add gestures while talking, make them move more, and add color :D
its pretty nice :D

45Percent responds:

That's a good Idea, Next time there will be more effort and more emphasis put into the animations and voices.

Not Bad..

Good jokes. Could've spent a little more time on the drawings, color, characteristics? That's ok. Also, when you're going to yell. FUCKING YELL!! Don't hold back on your voice.

Not bad...

Not bad...
add some detail and color :)

45Percent responds:

Yeah I agree, my next one will be colored
And have at least a but more detail :P

Pretty good.

good for your third submission. work on your animations, and add color.

tip

wen it comes to screaming just scream in the movie dont fake scream that just dumb

45Percent responds:

:P
If I've learnt one thing from this animation it is to SCREEM!!!!
Thanks for the review :)

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3.15 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 23, 2008
3:39 AM EDT
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