good!
Add gestures while talking, make them move more, and add color :D
its pretty nice :D
Author Comments
Just something I made, I known its not great but I need to start some where with doing the actual movie side of flash and not just symbols and loops.
P.S I know its really bad but please review and give tips.
45Percent responds:
That's a good Idea, Next time there will be more effort and more emphasis put into the animations and voices.
Not Bad..
Good jokes. Could've spent a little more time on the drawings, color, characteristics? That's ok. Also, when you're going to yell. FUCKING YELL!! Don't hold back on your voice.
Not bad...
Not bad...
add some detail and color :)
45Percent responds:
Yeah I agree, my next one will be colored
And have at least a but more detail :P
tip
wen it comes to screaming just scream in the movie dont fake scream that just dumb
45Percent responds:
:P
If I've learnt one thing from this animation it is to SCREEM!!!!
Thanks for the review :)
Hmm...
What to say. It's a nice start. But if you want to make a better flash, you'll have to do more work. Try to use colors, improve the sounds, my speakers didn't like the yelling. If you'll keep working, your skills will improve, and so your flashes.
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