This is step 1

I liked it although There a lot of things to improve on. Learn how to make a better plot line. I enjoyed the plot and all but it kinda jumped from scene to scene without any development. If you want this to be a series you have to let it sit and introduce a character, with name and an interest in something he/she likes to do. Or something along the lines of that. It could be much more interesting. Can't wait to see were you go with this!

awsome!!!!

look!!!i dont have nothing to say cause i dont have something to say
all i can say to this vid is it is AWSOMe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It was nice

The story was nice and keep improving on the animation
sorry for the rating though, I had a reason for rating it like this

Haha.

It felt very much like a telivision cartoon, which isnt a bad thing at all because it worked. This was very good, I would just say that I wished it was just a little more exciting, dont ask me how you could make it more because i cant think of any things currently, and the main characters could have been colored in. Still, i enjoyed watching this.

Nice work

I would like to see how this series progresses