Lol
It was ok.
I like the begginig fart and the guy with butshit.
You should work more on details, like make effects, make the animation with more flow, more work. Hmmm, how do I put this.... Just do more and you will get better.
Author Comments
I threw this flash together in about a hour and a half... I just started to work with flash this week. VOTE 5 because its my first flash! lol you can tell by it that i'm new to the program but I find this actually pretty funny, I hope you do too!
Please watch all the way through! and the punchline is really easy to figure out, if you don't then uh oh time to go back to school
volcomsk8r12 responds:
thanx for the suggestions mate
Confusing But okay...
It was a bit funny but hard to understand the animation. But your good for a beginner just practice alot more.
volcomsk8r12 responds:
thanks mate! like I said this was just a quick throw together to see what a final product looked like, but some real hard work is on its way =D
about "sick mind"
yeah.. you're sick... animation looks not bad, but i can't find some sort of "interesting" or "funny" in it... -_-
volcomsk8r12 responds:
lol no worries, i just kinda threw it together. its not the funniest or best idea I have don't you worry
Not bad for a n00b to flash
Ive seen some begining flashes that are pretty lame, and this really isnt bad. I thought the way you made the grass was good for a beginer, but splines would have been the way to go. Also, the timing of the ice cream flying out of his hand was awkward, so try to keep objects' inertia consistent. Keep workin on your skillz, youre off to a good start =)
volcomsk8r12 responds:
thanks I do appreciate constructive crit. splines? yea i know about the ice cream looking really odd. I was going to use a motion guide but forgot =P oh well... it was a rush job
5? why?
Why the hell would anyone vote 5 on a peice of crap "because its his first video" i dont care if your mentally retarded and have never used a computer in your life, im not going to rate according to that! im going to rate according to the quality of the video! now of course this video is better then stickmen and crap like that, but im not rating it on the basis of how "new" this person is to youtube!
volcomsk8r12 responds:
its newgrounds
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