Preety decent
There was some pros and cons
Cons
there was no dialougue, choppy animation
Pros
Nice idea, great artwork
Author Comments
goma part 2 still isnt finished but ive nearly done the aimtion part of it so i thought id upoad it anyways.
if you like it please comment so i can be happy that ive got some fans.
sub10 responds:
thanks man.
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the animation is good but this is so boring i almost died
good job but i have to say something
Dragon Ball Z art and animation style with forever own newgrounds.... always has always will. and if you dont see it your one of three things.
1. blind
2. stupid
3. you still watch Dragon Ball Z
any of the abovie choices are not very good outcomes.
sub10 responds:
its number 3
A suggestion.
You might wanna get some voice actors in your flashes, it would really improve the scores people give you. Then again your also gonna have to write a script. Also don't keep your style too DBZ style, try keeping it original if you can. Your artwork however is pretty good. Fine tune your drawing skills and I'm sure you'll so great.
Cheers.
sub10 responds:
thanks man ill do that.
ive nearly done the voices for part one so have a look and tell me wht you think.