Could be better.
Try slowing the text down so people can read it. Also, add a pre-loader. Also, graphics could use some work, but I can tell some effort was put into it. 2/5.
Author Comments
it started well but then i just gave up and came out with that crappy ending :) enjoy
fozzer43 responds:
i was kinda confused how to do the preloader so i just left it ...p.s ill slow it down next time ty for the review
I see potential
Overall that flash sucked hard but I still more potential in ur work and I hope to see something better in the future
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