wow
nice for a first flash make it longer though u can check out my first flash if u want...
Author Comments
This is my first real flash. Don't expect too much from it.
SoulPiker responds:
OK.
Is bad
So you can tween. Congratualtions. This is hardly a movie though being 3 seconds long and all. This did not deserve to pass but it looks like the silly 5-voters from yesterday forgot to stop.
SoulPiker responds:
But it did pass anyway. Cum round ma hoose and al teach ye how tae mak flash like a man.
Not bad
Clean, smooth, not stick, and color.
Sound would be nice, as well as plot; Spend a good amount of time on the next one, im sure it will be great
SoulPiker responds:
I will try harder next time.
Not bad
It's not bad for your first time. You have a lot of potential of doing something great. Just make your next submission a little longer with a plot.
SoulPiker responds:
I didn't know what story to put anyway.
Not bad.
With a little bit of sound, Maybe a plot line and a little more length, This would be deserving of a 10. But for now, 4/5 and 7/10.
SoulPiker responds:
I will try. >_>
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2.58 / 5.00
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- Aug 16, 2008
- 10:55 AM EDT