Terrible.
This is, as everyone calls it, douchebaggery. You can stop IMing your butt-buddies to get this shit to pass, because you suck. This doesn't even deserve any constructive criticism.
Hell, even this is better.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /471948
If you're not gonna pry your head out of your ass and get working, then eternal damnation will come upon you.
Have a nice day.