Bad

Short and boring, terrible flash

Bit more?

That has potential, and I can clearly see you have some talent at animating, too. However, I'll be honest, I expected this to be a little longer and have a bigger punch than this. Still, a nice little animation, in my book.

Clean drawings

The animations was a little choppy though it seemed, a higher frame rate fixes that. You also may want to fill out your userpage so that this account looks legitimate. I can't tell if this is the original creator or someone who stole it. Aside from the fact that the username matches the name of the site of the animator that makes these flash's there is nothing to make me believe this was not stolen.

very nice

Quite short, but it has a point and is quite origional. Also very nice graphics and i love the slideshow idea, very origional.

try again.

not this time, keep working at it.