liked the randomness
I liked the randomness of it all strangely enough. The hardware store with wierd al was a definate nice touch I think of that song every time I hear the words hardware store. Made me smile.
It was okay, you could have changed your voice between characters so they didn't all the sound the same or made it so they walked without a limp.
Pfff, why not?
It was ok, not great, didn't make me smile but it was better than some of the stuff, I hope you make it past judgement, needed to be longer for me to have an actual opinion. If it gets blammed then take what you have and just expand it. Its actually ok.
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.............. what?