Hehe...
That was good. I hope you continue this one.
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My first portal submission in... really quite a long time. This one's a bit of an epic, at 7 minutes long.
This cartoon tackles themes as diverse as dentists, childhood traumas and chives.
Some of the audio goes a bit out of synch near the end. I'm not sure why - probably because the cartoon's so long. Any advise on how to fix this would be welcome!
void150 responds:
Thank you! There will definitely be more submissions from me before the year end, but Michael Staircrumb's future is yet to be decided. Mind you, if people want to see more of his tales, it's possible he will return...
:)
Nasty short and British
I think you have to be British to enjoy this sort of scabby dark humour. Personally I love it, but I don't think many other people will appreciate the dissonant vibes. It reminded me a lot of David Firth's stuff.
I hope you will do more episodes, cos this is defintely my kind of horror / bleak comedy thing.
Questions - where is our tragic hero going to live now ? How will he afford to buy spores ?
I need to see more !
void150 responds:
Thanks very much - especially since I'm a fan of Firth's work, so that made me happy!
I'm not sure if this particular story will be continued (although it's not impossible) but there are a number of other cartoon projects in the pipeline. Glad you liked this one :)
Ouch.
It's not funny.
Or entertaining. Or anything.
I kept waiting for something to be genuinely watchable, but I got nothing. It was so slow paced and horribly random that it was actually painful.
.... sorry
that wasnt enjoyable at all
there was no background music
the jokes were bland
voice acting was... bad.. i didnt like it sorry
Sorry mate...
If this was my submission, I'd like good things to be said. But i just didn't see skill or quality seen in this, sorry mate.