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My first flash by Ryan

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My first flash, please be helpful and give me advice, no insults please!

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the music...

kinda reminds me of elevator music, in which, I liked your flash, but try to make it a bit longer

Good

Actually, quite excellent for a first flash. I'd suggest putting a bit more detail towards your backgrounds and transitions. The music seemed suitable, if a bit monotonous. Flesh out your story, add a few more static elements here and there, and you'd have a solid entry.

Hope to see more from you.

hahaa

not bad. I might suggest that for ryan's walk, you might just make him go up and down, but change the legs, all you would need would be three different sprites for the legs; left leg forward, right leg forward, and both legs the same

good

I'm also making my first flash, i hope i can reach this' level:D
it's kinda good:)

Good!

Twas funny, just keep trying and it'll just get better!

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Aug 3, 2008
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