ATTENTION: Recommend to the Final Fantasy collection? :D
Edit: Shit! I'm sorry, but I guess you're only allowed two submissions per day! I guess I'll submit the last part tomorrow... Shoulda thought of that, sorry everyone.
Wow. What to say about this project. I have been constantly frustrated, held up and obsessed with it. And now, when I look at it, I see 100 things I could've done better. On the other hand, I've learn so much from it, and have positive feelings about it too. It just took a long time. :D...
I'm sorry I had to break it up into three pieces, I'll try to keep the next one together. Although each piece is about 3 min long which is not bad at all, so please take that as a consolation. Don't forget to look for the easter egg, which is an extras zone.
All comments are read and appreciated. The goal of this series is for me to constantly improve with each episode, so if you have constructive criticism, I'd love to hear it. (especially with actionscripting or backgrounds) I've already started updating the graphics for the next episode (see hidden extras section) and I know I have to work on timing. Those are the main problems.
Yeah, look for that extras zone, because I actionscripted it all myself, like a big girl. lol.
Pretty cool so far
Good drawings, good animation, but the dialogue was the best part. My main gripe with this was differently the cinematography, as in, the same angles were used time and time again, just that dead on angle, and it made this slightly boring. I'm off to watch the next part now.
That's a good point, I'll keep that in mind.
Great
Great job on the animation and well the plot overall too, great job XD
Awesome!!
That was great! The acting was really great - I loved the art. When Cliff was angry and his eyes were shaking, that was great - the way his nose went up and down amused me a little though :p
Awesome job - the sound quality went down a little, but it wasn't bad or anything, I'm sure it was a necessary sacrifice for the size, but 1.8 MB really isn't that big, I'm sure if you exported with higher sound quality next time it still wouldn't be too huge.
Really great job, the art, animation, voice acting, everything was great. (On to the next part!) I had a lot of fun!
Yeah, Alonna's VA mentioned something about that too. Look forward to working with you on the next ep!
very good
like the animation style its fluid too
this is great
I am really glad i got to do this, and i did a better job on the acting than i thought i had. I really liked this, and i predict a great score. (you should post links to the parts on the VAC) All the problems that i saw you already mention on your review
I'll do that. You're voice really made the character, man ^_^
