yeah well
backgrounds are not contributing and the song sucks but i must add the pictures added are not in any other quiz or website i have checked AND I HAVE CHECKED ALOT xD so I must first of all add this as favs and give it a 4/5
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Well,This is something my friend made, at first he didn't want to submit it since he said it sucks(I do to XD).But I told him I'll post it, since he woke me up at 4 Am just to help him out with some of the voicese and animation(he did all the moveing and stuff, I just told him how it works, I'm guessing he's not used to it though).I had to do the voices of the demon and the bird. It's about a kid that has some sort of virus that his eyes cannot see movement in the real life,but he can see movement in games.So one day he gets a phonecall from his mom saying that he won an online game and he rushes to it.He goes off to play it and something happens(Or so my friend says) and the adventure begins.
I was trying to help my friend with his animation and texting, but he didn't want my help -_-. I did bought him a new microphone cause the one he has sucked, that's why in the end it sounds better.
He also told me to do the next one 0_o....But i got drawing to do, so you got to wait for the next one.(But I bet alot of you will hate it XD)But trust me, If i ever do the next one, It will be better than this....errrrr...thing -_-
pretty cool
but...if i got that game i would totally pwn eveything because i would be Master Chief. who wouldnt?!
Feyvern responds:
0_o You really tought it was cool,I'll tell that to my friend XD.I'm going to make the next one and It will be better, since unlike my friend,I know a little more about flash.
ALL SHALL LEAVE, MASTER CHIEF IS COMING XD
It has some potential I think.
But there is alot to work on, such as voice overs they really need improvement. Maybe try getting outside help instead of doing them all yourself and try not putting your mouth so close to the microphone. Then there is the music, try finding something less annoying and please turn it down, nobody likes loud annoying music. The story sounds kinda interesting but a little cheesy at the same time but you might be able to go somewhere with it maybe.
Feyvern responds:
Naw, when I DO the next one, I'll put no voice overs,since there's not much people around to do voices(Like my friend-who did all the voice over with that stupid microphone he has).Thats the funny part, he doesn't talk to close to it,He has that stupid fan way to close to the microphone, and he talks to damn loud -_-.I agree with the music to. Yeah he doesn't make good stories -_-. But when i start making part 2..I'll make it more interesting instead of making stories that lack elements.
Kind of...
I thought that your idea was good, but there was too much dialoge. Some parts could have been taken out to make it a faster paced flash. Also the sound was not very consistent, so just keep trying.
Feyvern responds:
Tsk, your telling me, my friend is someone who doesn't know when to stop...He just keeps going and going.When I do the next one, I'm not even going to put sound(Mainly because there's not much people to do the sounds) But I comp[letely agree with you
Poor animation
What bothers me far more than the iffy backgrounds and the poor microphone quality is the "animation"... why does everyone glide? How can you expect to tell a story if you can't even animate walking?
Feyvern responds:
I agree with you,I was trying to help my friend with that, but he's just to damn self-centered